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    dots Submission Name: Y.W.O.I.P.Z.F.G.dots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 937
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    Description:
       The letters in the title stand for Young Woman Of Inspired Passionate Zeal For God.. Which is basically what my piece is about.


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    dotsY.W.O.I.P.Z.F.G.dots
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    Everytime I want to give up,

    Something inside me just won't let me go,

    I feel it's my determinated spirit that I've been given which was placed in me even before i was born,

    When I say or try to throw in the towel,

    I hear a small voice in the center of my heart say, "No not so, for there is a divine destiny I have just for you, my beloved child that with my help only you can fulfill",

    So many in the years past have said I carried an attitude of not caring what others thought of me,

    To my surprise in the year of 02, that statement actuallt became true and within me I instantly knew I had been growing,

    A Christ-like mind i was gradually gaining and the transformation even non- christians somehow sensed,

    Which made me glow bright with exciting joy because after all the years of prayinng I was finally making a difference for Christ,

    I was being seen my others exactly how I wanted even though it wasn't popular or fashionable,

    but better yet it was someone who eagerly wanted to be a living testimony and witness for my awesome father who stood at my every side,

    Who was Jesus Christ my Abba father in whom i dearly cherish with everything in me and my all,

    Change for me is forever happening so that others may see who I serve and bow before him in geniuene love and adoration flowing from a pure heart to seriously worship, praise, and glorify him.






    Submitted on 2005-01-14 13:54:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was a great testimonial piece! Its great to hear of how God is working...He has a plan for everyone that nothing can stop...its encouraging to know that! Thanks for sharing...God Bless ya, and have a nice day!
    -Shanwothan
    | Posted on 2005-01-14 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]


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