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    dots Submission Name: C.V.W.A.H.dots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 287
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 1245
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1663



    Description:
       The title of this one is Chosen Vessel With Anointed Hands, and i think i have some spelling errors but bear with me, ty.


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    dotsC.V.W.A.H.dots
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    I wanna be somebody people will remember but not nessarily popular but reconigized for what I've accomplished with this God given talent of mine,

    Not to be praised for my work or how it helped,

    touched, or inspired others in many ways,

    But glory is due to God for using me in this awesome way not me,

    I'm just an open vessel that he chose to use,

    So with my hands and a pen with paper,

    Out of my heart my father's message flows,

    Which is one of love, hope, and peace so that through my hands and the flow of my heart,

    Many will come to know who they meed to be serving,

    Because hes the ultimate G.O.D of things everlasting, restored, and set free,

    With only him our true identites and potentical is shown so that the real warriors of God can proudly stand taking their rightful places in Gods army,

    Where the devil and small his imps get the smack
    down and Gods army with his mighty strong soldiers get the victory and win every battle with God as our protector and sheild,

    Always willing to take full control of our battles if we only give him the chance with letting go and letting God completely,

    Only then will we be at peace knowing that it's all in his hands and that we don't have to fret or worry because the battles are already won and those situations solved and done,

    So always look up to the only one who can do it all,

    above, and beyond,

    My Lord who is my Superman!.




    Submitted on 2005-01-14 14:16:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hehe..I really like the last line on here! Ii think it really brought everything to a great finish, although it almost seemed climatic...which is a good thing! :)

    Yyou are right there were a couple places ya might wanna revise...I think I noticed "talent God given talent" ...I didnt quite get what that was meaning, but maybe I just dont know...

    It read pretty well though, and the meaning was very good! I enjoyed it alot! Thanks...
    Have a good day!
    -Shawnothan
    | Posted on 2005-01-14 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]


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