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come back to me


Author: love gone wrong
ASL Info:    27/m/colorado
Elite Ratio:    2.14 - 337 /381 /42
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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come back to me



I yearn for sin
To feel it again
Wind in my hair
Free, without a care
I miss you baby
Come back to me
Give me my fix
Vibrations.....smiling lips
Racing heart, adrenaline flow
Warm, throbbing below
I'm overwhelmed by the need
to feel you...
to hear you...
to control you...
I miss you baby
Come back to me
The world waits
For our climactic return to grace
Come back to me




Submitted on 2004-03-25 17:17:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey, i really like this too! Its kinda sensual...and it flowed wonderfully! Great Job!
| Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]


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