Description: symbolism golore, you decide meaning.
Revenge for the Broken Heart -------------------------------------------
Dawn has come
the rain has stoped
the walls are crismon
liquid life spilled on white washed carpet
they are due home
they cannot see this
what should he do?
the switchblade shakes in his grip
images of blood and mourning
are on his envious eyes
doubt sets in
he can not decide if the demise was worth it
he turns and faces the bedroom door
it is shut
the body sulks in the corner
pupils miniscule, eyes glaring at him
it is still alive...
IT CAN"T BE!
"I must finish this!" he cries
the switchblade firm
he pounces on the body as a black panther on a doe
more wounds
gashes across the neck
slits on the arms
punctures to the heart
he cannot stop
the bullet arrives
he slumps over onto his side
pupils miniscule
staring at the hero
I really like this. Not sure if I understand what's going on. But, I made it to fit something in my life. Although the imagery and flow are amazing to me. You're not afraid to write what you feel and that's awesome.
Submission Name: Revenge for the Broken Heart
