this is deep. so deep. that i can in a way relate to what you are saying. it isnt much but sometimes you only need a little bit of something to really understand more than you do if it was long and lengthy. very nice job here. one of your best works i think.
I like this as it is, but you COULD always add more. I'm an annoying minimalist who would probably like two words and consider it a poem if they were strung together properly. This is sort of like the corruption of Pandora's hope. You do need to do a good spell/grammar check on this because you misspelled whisper and missed a period.
I think you could probably lengthen this poem with the stuff you put in the description. I like the whole dance idea. If I were you I would make some sort of allusion to Shiva, but I'm not you, so do whatever you want. Reason does seem to ruin things. However perhaps if we were really reasonable we could fix things up. It seems that just by sitting around and hoping things will get better we're making things worse.