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    dots Submission Name: Leisure Deaddots

    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
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       This poem was written to attempt to excersise an inner demon I am battling. Hopefully you can understand it's meaning. I realize it is vague. Some help would be appreciated.

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    Leisure Dead

    A monstrosity within roots my psyche, Entwining the poison unto myself
    Embraced the wound in fester, Devours all sane perception
    That which is constant, Is cast aside
    Chasm of doubt preys my fear, Incapacitating fluent reason
    The secretiveness of my pain, Allows no assistance
    Blinding of sight, No parole of forgiveness
    The actions been rehearsed, the outcome is final
    Destruction of trust, Expires the vow

    A promise, nay, a gamble, to begin anew
    A wary path, perchance a falter
    The hopes of another, The liability undertaken
    Expectancy of change, Remberance of pain
    Anotherís world is fractured, Brought down as scorn
    The desire leeches, It muddles my premise
    Releasing only, When riddance is wrought
    Angst of realization, Torture of hurt
    The final outcome, Divides my world
    Leisure dead in heart and soul

    Submitted on 2005-01-15 22:28:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one had alot of ,etaphors and those seems to enhance the affect of any poem.

    I liked this poem it idk why hit me with a rather confusing wave of aww.
    I couldn't agree with you more when it comes to fighting your inner demons it is a lot of torture and pain, not only on you but every one that can get involved.

    Nice piece
    | Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]

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