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    dots Submission Name: Secret Lovedots
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    Author: Kalidoscopeeyes
    ASL Info:    18/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 122/151/29
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Romance
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    Bytes: 386



    Description:
       i didn't realize how much this sounded like a john mayer song until after i was done. hmm...


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    dotsSecret Lovedots
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    let's tuck our toothbrushes into our back pockets
    and go dancing off into the night.
    hold hands
    and whisper into each other's ears.
    we'll pepper each other with innocent kisses,
    let the red and white lights
    trail dreams through our minds.
    and we'll fall asleep to the sound
    of drowsy breathing and city sirens.




    Submitted on 2005-01-15 22:50:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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