With blond hair and blue eyes,
you'd expect nothing short of perfection.
You'd be wrong.
Because she writes of the tears she's shed,
but you'll never see her cry.
I can see it.
There's something in her eyes
that says she never says all that's
racing through her mind.
There's a wall she likes to keep up,
but those damn eyes give her away
and I can see my reflection
every time she looks at me.
Well i definitely think this is a good poem, and it gives an apt description of this girl i'm sure. The only thing i see wrong is that u say eyes a lot...maybe if u could convey the same idea with different wording? hehe i dunno im picky but i do like this...its always great to paint a picture with words, especially for a certain person. Good Job. Laura
well maybe i like it because i know who you are talking about. You should write more about her though...like her mannerisms so she seems more real to people like she is to us. -D
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