A nice misc/misc poem :)...Quite discriptive! This is almost like a longing poem waiting for the love across the sea :) At least that's what it reminds me of ;)...as far as advice/critique...a couple of quick suggestions...try to cut down or eliminate the "ands, and the its" You can condense this down and it would flow even better!...The use of "warm smile" is a bit cliché and you may look for a better, more descripitive/powerful adjetive :) Overall I enjoyed this a great deal and offer my praise!
Hi there this is like a beautiful painting written in words. It makes one think there is always someone on the other side waiting for us. I wish it were so lol. To the poem. I like the message behind it and the idea is great. It has a perfect ending. Nice work with love shabnam