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    dots Submission Name: Heart: A Memoirdots
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    Author: River
    ASL Info:    17/F/New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 26/37/14
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsHeart: A Memoirdots
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    A broken one lies in deep desperation of forceful tears that flow softly behind the closed doors of life. We don’t really know what it’s made of until that sharp feeling concurs above your bosom. Pain; a feeling that you wish will vanish but never goes away. Love’s necklace, sometimes to be cherished, sometimes to be lost. A pendant dangling on a string, never to know what lies below. Will it fall to its tragic death? Or will we keep it forever?




    Submitted on 2005-01-16 20:34:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was not a poem, clearly it states next to poem Memoir.....A memoir is piece of work about a point in your life, or any event......I spoke about Heart...and what it is...But i guess you have to be deep to understand it...right?
    | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by River | [ Reply to This ]



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