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    dots Submission Name: Ur Lifedots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 210
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 470



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    dotsUr Lifedots
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    You broke my heart
    wat to say
    it had to be
    on that one day
    whyd you do it
    i dont kno
    im guessing this is just goodbye
    you dont seem to care
    that you made my heart tear
    my eyes have cried
    my conscience seems so tied
    i cant make up my mind
    of wat to do
    or wat to say
    the time is flew
    my mind is made up
    of wat to say
    its ur own life
    im on my way




    Submitted on 2005-01-17 01:44:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this is a heart breaker... even if it was his life i bet he would had want you to give ur oppinion in it. i know i would but yeah. anyways pretty good write
    | Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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