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    dots Submission Name: I Dont Knowdots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 490



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    dotsI Dont Knowdots
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    I dont know what to say
    i dont know what to do
    i dont know if you really love me
    the way you say you do
    i dont know how it will go
    that i do not know
    i dont know how your feelings towards me are
    you'd probably rather want to go to a bar
    my heart is torn between two
    hey at least its not a few
    i think my heart belongs to you
    i hope out is wat we shall do
    but like i said before
    this i dont know




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    ||| Comments |||
      Well its an ok poem which tells me and everyone you are basically the middle part of a love triangle and that two guys have your heart. Its a nice read but it would be nice if the chat speak went away beacuse it cuts the poems true meaning in words used. overall you showed nice feeling. thanks and keep writing
    | Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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