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    dots Submission Name: Once Always Wishingdots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOnce Always Wishingdots
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    Wishing I could be a teen again,

    So worryless and carefree,

    While only looking to enjoy the important things of the world and have fun,

    Such as friends, church, and just kickin' it and surpassing the peer pressure from the crowds that try to have an influence,

    Yet learning about myself on the inside and out, my personality, style, things Im good at and not, what true friends are, and so on,

    Finally accepting who I truely am and what I stand for while in my mind desperately wishing I could get them back,

    Only knowing thats impossible because those years of my life are ended and done but feeling they can be restored to the years of now even better if I don't allow those same things of my growing years to bother me,

    But instead live out loud and show the world who I'm becoming and who what matters most to me so that when the day ends,

    I can be happy with what I've accomplished and proud of who I be while staring into the eyes of positivity and loving every second knowing that I'm constantly growing into a beautiful masterpiece.





    Submitted on 2005-01-17 12:28:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that this was wonderfully thought out and put together. It gives such a positive message and I like reading positive pieces. Especially from you. This one was unique from the rest of your work/writing. That's why I think I like it so much. You showed another side of you and shared it with us. Talent is showing in this. For the main reason being that you found positive influence within yourself and because you wrote it just about yourself and your innermost thoughts. Bravo! *clapping*

    Keep it up girl!

    Alicia
    | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah..i can totally relate to this write in one sense: i sometimes wish i didnt have to grow up! lol... but then I see how God is leading me, and all He has done and is going to do and I just want to jump into His will and let Him take me and use me for whatever He wants! You have a very original, personal, and honest form of writing that is very good! I enjoyed reading this and I think others will find it encouraging as well! Good work. Thanks for sharing!
    God Bless, and have a great evening!
    -shawnothan
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]


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