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    dots Submission Name: How Would It Be?dots
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    Author: loveispain
    ASL Info:    23/f/ME
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 283/198/51
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 1041
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1031



    Description:
       Just being nervous or anxious about meeting up with someone that obviously hurt you. You hope it works out...because you truly love the person. But you don't know how it's going to be.


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    dotsHow Would It Be?dots
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    If I saw you again
    How would it be?
    What would I say?
    How would I feel?
    Laugh, cry, scream, smile
    Love, hate
    What would it be?

    Would it be like before?
    Would it be Heaven on Earth?
    Or would the anger take over
    And the fire and darkness take me in?
    Would you still have an effect on me?
    Or am I now free?
    Would your voice be the same sweet music?
    Maybe it will hurt
    And maybe I will cry

    What if I told you exactly what I think?
    What if I don't know?
    Would I still get lost in your eyes?
    Or will there be nothing?
    Am I going to feel anything?
    Are you going to lie?
    Have we ever been honest?
    Was any of it real?
    Did I fool myself and dig myself so deep
    I can't ever get out?
    Would you even care if I hated you?
    Would it matter if i loved you?
    Did it ever matter?
    If I saw you again
    How would it be?




    Submitted on 2005-01-17 17:03:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the memories this brings back. Reminds me of my ex who even after everything still wants to see me. I just want to forget him. Leave what we had in the past, where it belongs. I liked it. And forget wat mr. poetitoe wrote, hes an ass. keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by shattered_star | [ Reply to This ]
      Forget what the person before wrote.. This seems like an amaxing piece with the most valuable questions. I know I wish they were answered for me too
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this is amazing, the description is so good and the idea of the poem is thoughtful... wat would it be like? how can nething be the same? u really raise some controversy in my mind, i bow to u
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by rapius | [ Reply to This ]


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