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    dots Submission Name: The Questiondots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 874
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 879



    Description:
       Its the question everyoe wants to ask and get an answer from. What would you answer? Given that we two might one day begin dating. Not as a stranger.


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    dotsThe Questiondots
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    For a while
    as long as I could see
    two puzzle pieces, fit
    together you and me.
    If you should take
    upon my request
    I promise that
    I'll do my very best.

    I ask the sacred question
    you give the holy answer
    Its up to you to decide
    the only thing I ask you to provide.
    A simple yes or no,
    I need nothing else
    or I could just look into your eyes
    Is that where my answer is?

    Will you let me make you
    that happiest woman alive?
    Will you allow this wandering soul
    to take shelter in the warmth of your glow?
    Can I make one last sentence
    before I let you think?
    Do you think
    that we can connect two hearts
    and belong to one another
    as long as time bids us so?

    Now, Its your turn.




    Submitted on 2005-01-17 17:23:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      O MY GOD! If someone gave me something like this, it isn't hard to answer at all. This is abosolutely trulty amazing. I am serious. It's so romantically sweet, almost sickly sweeet if you know what I mean. But I love this so. Getting added to my fav-s list...
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think i should read more of your work. Its so sweet. Dude if it was me, I'd say yes. Lucky girl, i hope she knows. good job. keep it up. and if she says no, there's always more fish in the sea. (I'm pretty sure she'll say yes)
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by shattered_star | [ Reply to This ]
      Romantic. Sweet. Endearing. I hope all works out for you, or did. But, just remember that if it doesn't, with a talent like this and the ability to be this romantic you should have no problem attracting another girl. Whoever this girl is, is extremely lucky.
    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh Wow! That is soooooooooo romantic! I just melted as I kept reading. Whoever you are asking the question to really aught to say yes. Otherwise they are just dumb. Blessed Be Andrea
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]


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