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    dots Submission Name: My tears?dots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsMy tears?dots
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    Its not fair..
    Why this happening to me...
    It happened more than 5...
    Its a really sucky feeling...
    All I every do is cry...
    Everyday...Every week...Every month...
    All I ever do is think about you,
    why do you do this too me..
    You don't like me...
    But I like You so much..
    Their are no words to describe my feelings..
    All I say is that I want you..
    But all I get is you with you girlfriends..
    All my tears are falling...
    seeing you with one of my friends...
    One who doens't like you...
    You two making out right in front of me..
    Why would either of you do this too me..
    All I want is you to let me love you..
    But You always say NO...




    Submitted on 2005-01-17 18:15:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you know sometimes short, and to the point is the best way to go. this poem is one of those cases. we've all been through the same situations.
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by timberwolf23 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really cute but i dont know why pepole are saying ohh this poem..its supposed to be a thought. Some people dont have respect and if he can just do that to you and know you are hurting and your friend then they arent really worth it and neither is the friend. Life is so much better when you let of things that are really getting to you and move on. I cant say that for every thing but for most things
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by Hazel eyes Jess | [ Reply to This ]
      this write is good,but it can be better.give more descpriptive things you know what i mean? and also,there are minor typos you might wanna look at...
    | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by black_joker1292 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem.it's true you could've used more to words to describe how you were feelin but i often write poems like these so that i can get things off my chest.but i admire you for that...and it's a good poem.
    | Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by Jeka | [ Reply to This ]



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