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***He Is...***

Author: Wynne Devereaux
ASL Info:    23 yrs.old/M/Texas
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God is infinite and wonderful and I love him for loving me and keeping me and doing so many things that I can't even begin to reccount or embellish on.
I'm just overcome by his beauty!!!!!!!!!

***He Is...***


What can one say?
How do you explain...or describe who he is?
Who are you Lord?
How are you?

Thoughts and Images
leave abstract and surreal
visions floating freely and definitively within
my mind and my heart.

My soul-scape rejoices.
My inner smiles.


He is like the fresh kiss of
frost to roof tops.
He is like the combination of
rich browns, oranges, reds, greens,
yellows, whites, blacks and grays
that herald the approach of
He is like the sweet caress of
a light breeze on a bright November
afternoon...sheer peace.
He is infinite.
He is so far, yet so close.
He fills one up like the waters
do the sea and skies.
He is boundless and excellent.
He is...He is... He simply is.

He is the beauty of simplicty.
He is the wonderful feeling of luxury.
He is the brightness of the sun.
He is the whisper in my spirit and
the echo in my heart.
He is that hidden and subtle pulse and
beat in a highly rhythmic song.

He is my everthing, my every day, my every
breath, my every sight; the center
of who I was, I am and who I will be.
He is, He is, He is,

Submitted on 2005-01-18 02:23:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  great passion and a real personal familiarity grace this writing with a feel that mark it as a genuinely true and original piece. I loved the love for God expressed here.. To me, it sounded alot like King David's psalms in the Bible..not exactly, but just the way you go on and on, describing how He has displayed Himself in all of creation and how amazing that is! Yeah, this was really inspiring! Thanks for sharing.. it is an awesome meditation!
God Bless,
| Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by Shawnothan | [ Reply to This ]
  Yes he is God.
God does have a interesting effect on people dosen't he?
You often call me a gifted writer a writer blessed. But you are the one my friend who is gifted and who is blessed. With each and everything that you write this is proven to me more and more.

Peace and Love
God Bless
| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  great work my friend, this truly embodies how i feel about the Lord, He is everything and yet we almost always dont see Him. i really loved this poem as i love everything you write. great great work as usual
| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by bkj43 | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful writing. God really is something. He seems to have a knack for sending things when you least expect them. I think that's just part of His way though, He knows what we need more than we do. I wouldn't change a word of this my dear. Great stuff. Much love to ya and God bless. :-)
| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a beautiful poem Wynne, I am sure that God is smiling down on you for writing such a great poem about Him! Keep on writing my friend, and have a great day!

| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Nicely written! There isn't alot of poems about God on here but if there were I am GLAD yours is the one I read. Very questionable and creatively written! I don't have a fav part of the poem because the way it flows makes it all one poem and it is very nice. I like the whole thing and it is very creative like I said. Leaving who & what is God? Nice work peace & stay safe...
| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
  baby wow... this is so brilliant...
we once tried to write a song about how amazing God is... we reached and stretched for the biggest words we could find and all we could come up with was "AWESOME, MAGNIFICENT, HOLY IS OUR GOD" and yet it STILL didnt seem enough... it was the most frustrating experience ever...
you know the song "i could sing of your love forever"...? that is my song... seriously... get me started on the greatness of God and you will never shut me up... theres just so much to be thankful for...

i am always encouraged by reading your writes that are both to and about God... i struggle to find words that do my love for him any justice... everything i write sounds so cliché that i cannot do anything with it and yet i read this and its so real and so pure and so wow and makes me just wanna be like you when i grow up!
bless you millions boy... bye for now
| Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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