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    dots Submission Name: Brother Deardots
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    Author: grinninggashes
    ASL Info:    17/f/from sumwhere :)
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 154/124/25
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBrother Deardots
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    He wakes up every morning before me
    yet he lays in bed
    while im getting ready

    odly enough hes always ready 5 minutes ahead
    which isn't a suprise
    since theres hardly any hair on his head

    he mumbles lets go
    as we ride in my car
    he thinks about the spelling words he must know

    glancing over at his face
    i notice how similar we look,
    which isn't an every brother and sister case

    we pull up to our destination
    he doesn't say i love you or gievs me a hug
    but good bye is his only salutation




    Submitted on 2005-01-18 12:48:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked where this was going...yet it just lacked the emotion one would think should be there when speaking of a brother...yet seeing as all he says is goodbye maybe the lack of emotion in this piece is intentionaly.(?)
    | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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