Hero's are Deceiving
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More angry venting and disappointment, kind of like the poem i posted last night 'A Beacon for the Demented' kind of talks about the same person...
Hero's are Deceiving
What happens when your Hero fails you? You live as you see them doing Worship the ground they walk on You see all they've been through And you figure if they can be happy Then you can too You start eating less meat because you know They gave it up You do your best to smile and get good grades They do And so you know it must be right And then you learn your role model never made it to 'Life' Drugs, sex, & rock-n-roll Are the life they hide away So again you follow in their footprints Vicodin and Vodka make life a lot easier Cutting and smoking help the pain to fade away If you hero does it It can't be wrong ...can it? |
Submitted on 2005-01-18 18:40:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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wow... courtney this was really deep.. I don't even think I can find the words to describe the awesomeness of this poem.. it was like taking a two day nap... which is a good think for me... I truely think this was one of your best pieces... i really really like it alot.. your words were put together so well that it flowed all by itself... and the whole role model thing is probably something ever one can relate to.| | Posted on 2005-01-19 00:00:00 | by bleedbroken | [ Reply to This ] | WOW! This is an amazing write. I mean that is so sad... Yeah we all have role models and everything they do we want to do too.. But sometimes you got to draw a line... You no what I mean. If you don't think its right don't do it. But if you do then of course do it.. But everything has consequences... Sorry for my babbling... I really wonder who it is... Cause I no a couple of people whoes hero did that too... | SOo good write... stephanie  | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ] | I wonder who your "hero" is. Sometimes it can be easy to slowly build up such an admiration for one that they do become your hero... but hero's die. They make mistakes, quit their jobs... and let you down. I liked the way you told a story in the poem. It makes stories more interesting an poems less boring. :-) | | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ] | I liked this. it was a different form of writting which is refreshing. I just have a few questions...who is this role model or "hero" is it a lover? a friend? a parent? a sibling? | | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ] | daddy like. we see these people, many of whom are miserable morons, but becuase they have a spotlight on them we for some reason believe that they have life under control, when in fact life has them under control. i definitely enjoyed. side note: it's spelled "vicodin"...i used to get 150 ever 2 weeks, so i learned. great poem! | | Posted on 2005-01-18 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ] | |
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