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    dots Submission Name: Midsummer Dreamdots
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    Author: magickandie
    Elite Ratio:    4.34 - 190/168/37
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       This poem jist came to me last night as I was walking.


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    dotsMidsummer Dreamdots
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    In the heat of a Midsummer day,
    I lay my weary head.
    Amid a field of poppies,
    Such a firey shadde of red.

    At twilight of that Midsummer day,
    I awoke with a start.
    To see a Fairy Lord and his Fair Lady,
    Perched above my heart.

    As I gaze at them in awe and wonderment,
    The Fairy Lord askes with sheer amusement,
    "Silly Child, Have you not your own bed?"
    When I find my voice,
    I finally reply,

    "I ment no offense my Lord,
    The day was so warm,
    Mother Earth Looked so lush,
    Though I admit,
    I hadn't ment to sleep til dusk."

    The Fairy Lord smiled his understanding,
    His Fair Lady laughed with glee,
    As they continued to sit with me.
    The Lady Moon rose,
    Full and bright,
    We broke my eveing fast,
    And spoke late into the night.

    When our time came to an end,
    I placed a token of gratitude upon the land,
    While the Fairy Lord and His Fair Lady,
    Fluttered to the bend.

    Just befor they disappeared from sight,
    The Fairy Lord called to me,
    "Dear Child, though you you are young,
    You practice of Old.
    Come break your evening fast with us,
    Another night."




    Submitted on 2005-01-19 15:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet dreamy quality to this without too much of the saccharine. Nice write. Other than running a spell-check [why don't people do that before they post?! - OK, I'm done. ;-) ], nothing I can find to nit.
    Good job.

    Peace,

    Joey
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      I love mystical, dreamy writes such as this!

    I liked the sense of nature and meeting the Lord & Lady & sharing the evening with them.

    Great job! Love,Peace,Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      this was really good. i usually dont read poetry like this and im glad i tryed something new, i enjoyed it. the imagery was well done. I always read such dark and gloomy poerty and this was really refreshing. i look forward to reading more
    | Posted on 2005-01-28 00:00:00 | by Ann | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this. I have always said that in my forrest live nymphs and dryads and sometimes I would swear I can hear Pan on his little goat feet. I loved the field of poppies. I am sorry to read in your journal of your miscarriage, but perhaps the child that is yours is not to be carried in your womb. Blessed be. Lynn
    | Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a rather bold attempt at old 'Faeiry' poetry. You did well even though you are in high company. I liked the story you crafted although the early writers would have written it pages longer. You had a misspell or two if you recheck. I think it would better served, if you cared, to beef it up a little. perhaps you could use some pretty words to discribe the Lord and Lady, but that is just a suggestion and nothing more. Nice work!
    | Posted on 2005-01-19 00:00:00 | by dmm | [ Reply to This ]



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