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    dots Submission Name: raindots
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    Author: fallenelf
    ASL Info:    19/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 43/56/23
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 277
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 296



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       whatever. i just added it to my aim profile which i wrote in like 2 seconds not even a minute ago.


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    dotsraindots
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    under the skies the rain of death
    the bloodless eyes i see before
    over your body the wounds have kept
    i have inflicted into your words
    that which will misguide you from your hold
    deep beneath the lies you've told
    have i only to see the beauty within




    Submitted on 2005-01-19 19:16:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short and to the point...i like it! the wording you used was excellent! this piece has such a great meaning...everything really fell into place...good write!
    | Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by black_joker1292 | [ Reply to This ]



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