Deep in the Night -------------------------------------------
They say that there's one true love
In every life
Thought I had it all with you
That we'd done everything right.
Then you said that you were leaving
You didn't love me anymore
There was nothing left to say
When you walked out the door
Chorus
But deep in the night
your memory haunts me
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold
So I decided to go out
Try to find somebody new
he was a friend of a friend
And knew just what I'd been through
You know, we had a good time
And the next thin I knew
It was time for that first kiss
but all I thought of was you
Chorus
And deep in the night
your memory haunts me
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold
Bridge
So I'll search in every face
For that love that's meant to last
Because I know there's someone out there
Who'll put your memory in the past
Yes,I know that when I find him
Beside him I will stay
'cause it'll only take a llittle kiss
to sweep your memory away
Chorus
Still deep in the night
your memory haunts me
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold
I LOVED the bridge here and the lyrics altogether were great! I have to agree with the majority of people that comment on lyrics though, that it's difficult to do without the music backing it up or maybe even telling what genre of music these lyrics are for, just to give us a clue. Either way these were some darn good ones! Thanks so much for sharing! Candi
Right on JC! (bad comment) I dig it (bad comment) hehe... this is pretty cool... as I read this, I hit that bridge, and had to force myself to keep from reading that bridge 3 octaves higher... this piece almost sings to the reader, although the topic is nothing new, as is the case with most lyrics, your words seem to fit this mold of lyrics like a puzzle... *grabbin guitar...* mind if i yank this one for a piece of tune I think will work great with it ?
Hey I'm right here, by your side. Everything is ok.I'm here for you now. If the dream bugs bite you I'll bite em back. this is another one that I like.I kinda connect with pop/rock tunes as well as country.
You know the difficulty in commenting on the lyrics of someone's song is that you don't have access to the tune that's been written for them. All that aside it's still possible to get a feel for what's being told and why and this is no exception because it's wriiten in an honest and open grand ole opry kind of way. I suppose all I'd suggest is some sort of development in the chorus so that by the time the last one comes 'round you're sounding altogether more assertive:
so I'll find me someone else and I'll break your memory's hold
It was great. You seem to really have put thought into this and it had a great rythm. I loved it and I hope to read more like it. I am new but I know a good song when I see one and I see yours. Blessed Be!
Submission Name: Deep in the Night
