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    dots Submission Name: ode to my fucked up motherdots
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    Author: poetsoul
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 109/151/32
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Misc/Angst
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    dotsode to my fucked up motherdots
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    flash me your peace sign,
    then hit me in the head with it.
    claim to be numb,
    then cut yourself and cry.
    come to visit and hate it here,
    then decide to stay.
    love your animals,
    then eat them.
    lie about being "such an honest person"
    your war is peace.
    your freedom is slavery.
    your ignorance is strenght.
    you kept me colorless
    everytime you forced you beliefs on me.
    i dont believe in your mormanism mom,
    stop shoving it down my throat.
    i had to grow as a person,
    while you werent looking.
    im a completly different person then what you think i am.
    i almost hate you, but i taught myself not to hate.
    i taught myself opposite from everything you raised me to believe.you lean on me because you cant trust yourself.
    i lean on myself because i cant trust you.
    i lost that the day you picked your sex and drugs over your own children,
    ithe first time you beat my brother,
    the first time i realized you really dont care.




    Submitted on 2005-01-20 17:30:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this mainly because I can relate. Some parts are how my mom is, most however would define my birth father. Anyways I thought the idea was well written in this. I really felt the emotions as I read this. Good write.
    | Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, sad poem. But then again, it's really good. I kinda laughed when I read "I had to grow as a person,
    while you werent looking.
    im a completly different person then what you think i am"
    I laughed cause in ways I can relate to that. Well I hope that you make it through these hard times.
    ~Kriss
    | Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]



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