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    dots Submission Name: Just Go Homedots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 323
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       My friend ran away from home, although this is something she may never read, this is what I'm mentally saying to her in the even that she could end up on the streets. A tad bit sad, yes, I know. I'm an emotional mess inside.


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    dotsJust Go Homedots
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    In the midst of disappearance
    a fleet of tears disappearing
    barely looking up
    fearing the sun and its message
    I'm here with you in coherence
    your tears smearing
    across the invisible glass
    that you surround yourself with,

    Running away
    it solves nothing.
    Delaying today
    it makes nothing.
    Faking to play
    it rewards nothing.
    Just turn around and go home.

    In the bright flurries of sunshine
    that awake you as you lie on the sidewalk;
    now, you have to deal with strangers instead of family
    when you had me,
    you didn't want me.
    But now that you're gone
    how will you take their passing glances
    when they tell you that you're wrong?

    Running away, still
    the past can catch
    Delaying today, still
    the future will match
    Faking to play
    the present will consume
    Please. Just go home.

    I know I could pray my heart out
    and you'd still not acknowledge God.
    I could show you rights from lefts
    but your sight now is just off target.
    You have selected vision,
    hearing, touch, but willing to taste anything
    you run in search of inspiration
    and run fro the ones that benefit you most.

    Running away from your past
    still solves nothing.
    Delaying today, hiding from the future
    still solves nothing.
    Faking to play the present
    and you will be captured
    and exposed to the memory of the home you once had.

    Hey! Remember that?
    Home.




    Submitted on 2005-01-20 21:36:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm sorry that this happened to you. I have so many friends that have left and ended up on the streets. Haven't heard of some of them in years...some months...some days. I wish I could say it gets easier. You're in my thoughts and prayers...as is she.
    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how you balance sarcasm with gentle prodding and heavy handedness with playful wording. My favorite part is the long/short stanza style. Excellent work.
    | Posted on 2005-01-20 00:00:00 | by jer | [ Reply to This ]



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