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    dots Submission Name: Dreamsdots
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    Author: elitegundam
    ASL Info:    25/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 68/90/20
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Written on Dec. 24, 2004
    This poem talks about the nightmares I talk about in my poem "The Loss Of A Child"


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    Nightmares float through my dreams,
    Horror and terror mingled with hope and trust.
    Like snowflakes, they float gently down,
    Invisible until they reach the light.
    Asleep they would be forgotten,
    but when the agony rips the veils of darkness,
    eyes open and the horror is burned
    into the memories of the mind.

    A blizzard of white, as plentiful as snow,
    swirling with the winds of things past,
    they fade when hitting the ground,
    indistinguishable among the ever present blanket that covers all.

    The full efect of these nightmares will never vanish,
    just as snow melts, they will fade.
    Only to unexpectadly return.




    Submitted on 2005-01-21 09:30:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      good display of emotions here. nightmares can be put into the back of our minds to the point we forget them. until they return at full force and bring back all those feelings. nicely written though. i love snow so for me it was a different look at it, one i like too**
    | Posted on 2005-01-25 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      Snow. I hate it. Love the poem tho. It has a flare to it even tho you relate the nightmares and the anguish to snow. Cool.
    agony rips the veils of darkness
    This line was my favorite, Its so... EViL. Great poem
    | Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      hi there!
    this is a great poem.i'm feeling so low after reading this one-that i dont write so gud-i've also submitted a poem by same name today(what a coincidence!).i hope you read and comment on it.yours is good-i like it//cheers.
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by poetofaustralia | [ Reply to This ]
      Need to use spell-check, but other than that it's quite spiffy. The imagery is, indeed, very lifelike and brings about a certain emotion, although that emotion does not feel like a nightmare?
    | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by Shuurinakisame | [ Reply to This ]



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