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    dots Submission Name: Borderline Casedots
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    Author: dmm
    ASL Info:    50/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 741/888/102
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 319
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1380



    Description:
       This is a one chord song that I wrote but our lead guitar player refused to play it cause it was too simplistic. I always thought it was a yuk!


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    dotsBorderline Casedots
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    She sat down next to me and flashed her smile.
    She started talkin' after a little while,
    she said 'I'm no fast lady but I like your face'.
    I said, 'Don't let it fool you, I'm a borderline case'.

    ooh, ooh he's a borderline case
    I said, ooh, ooh he's a borderline case.

    Ran away from school when I was only ten,
    didn't understand all the wheres or whens.
    Led the cops on a nine mile chase, they said,
    'Watchout for that boy, he's a borderline case!

    ooh, ooh he's a borderline case,
    I said, ooh, ooh he's a borderline case.

    Don't get me wrong I'm not evil or mean,
    I'm not out to get ya, I aint no Ed Gien,
    But if I screw you up and leave without a trace,
    my only excuse is, I'm a borderline case.

    ooh, ooh he's a borderline case,
    I said, ooh, ooh he's a borderline case.

    Now I wrote this song cause I'm all alone,
    ain't got nobody ain't got no home,
    But if you need some lovin' and you got a place,
    I'm your man, I'm a borderline case.

    ooh, ooh he's a borderline case,
    I said, ooh, ooh he's a borderline case.




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      I am very glad I stumbledupon your poems, they are awesome. Sorry the guy didn't like it I thought that it was pretty cool. I have a borderline personality disoreder. BUt thats just what they tell me.They are silly people.
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi dmm it is always nice to read one of your poems. They are almost all good.
    This one is very cute.
    I like the last stanza, it is the perfect ending.
    I must thank you cuz your poem brought smile on my face, the first smile since Saturday
    With love shabnam
    | Posted on 2005-01-24 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
       *giggles* i love it, although i'm sorry he refused to play it, i would have loved to have heard it. It makes me giggle and i go yay for the borderline cases! Nice write, and then i eat the toothpaste, per say
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by painofthanatos | [ Reply to This ]
      lol! this was really funny! your guitar player should play this! what a jerk! lol! I enjoyed it because I also write a lot of music and such.. but I liked the cadence of it.. it had a really good rythmn... great job! it made me laugh.. and I still can't figure out what a borderline cse is though! lol!
    ~Amanda
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by AmandaLyn | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this because it reminds me of those old folk poems they used to write. I really like it when poets revive old forms of writing, it shows a lot of resepect for the craft. You do a really good job with the meter and communicating the level of detachment of the speaker. Really, very good job.
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by roycureton | [ Reply to This ]



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