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    dots Submission Name: Rage against the machinedots
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    Author: The41stSmibble
    ASL Info:    19 male england
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 41/60/15
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 313
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 659



    Description:
       Just letting off some steam


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    dotsRage against the machinedots
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    All rise in the senate
    Let's fuck everybody over
    take them for a ride,
    injustice will be done
    Let's fuck everybody over

    All rise in the senate
    power mad crazed insane
    let's wait till there backs turned
    then stab stab stab
    power mad crazed insane

    Just cos we are ingnorant
    you take advantage
    never ask me what i want
    just because of my age
    you laugh growl and taunt
    always want want want
    well i got...retaliation

    fuck you,
    excuse me but fuck you
    sorry for the cuss but
    fuck you




    Submitted on 2005-01-21 09:57:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the style; you're bold and fresh. I think this could use some spell checking and grammatical work. Let's throw in a little punctuation too for clarity. Well done, I hope to see more from you. Live, Love, Write.
    | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, love the swear, that's cool. Your poem was a different style, and that's what I've been trying to look for. Great write, I want to see more.
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah this is bold and awesome, cuss it out I say, it makes you feel better and demands the attention it deserves. I think that your ideas are right on target. Good Job.
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]



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