Description: humm... i dont really know like before
"this person"was going to kill herself she called her boyfriend and if he answeared then she wont if he didnt then she will..kill herself
well please comment for me
final call -------------------------------------------
the final call
Is the call for help
this call I make to you
for only you can save me
when I dail your number I get a rush
with in my heart
...no one is answearing,
I really need you right now
you have failed me
Now i must leave
for there is nothing left to live for
for every slit of the knife
I think of your face the memories I had
i have gone to far to go back you can not save
for what i have destored within my soul
but yet wait..
the phone is ringing
i See your name on the caller I.D
what should i do?
should i answear to hear your voice one last time to hear the words"no i love you"
or to go on with it
it will all be over soon
I'm starting to fade with blood running
down my finger tips
Im not going to pick it up,
For that was the final call for help that was never answaerd
i liked it.. it was a nice piece.. well i havent ever been there and i am not a sait.. or well i dont think so anyway... but ohh well .. i liked it but it is kind of more of a short story in a way.. but ohh well dont mean to offend... sorry if i did and i hope everything gets better for you if its you .that you are talking about in the poem
It's all a bit modern day Romeo and juliet isn't it? I liked it alot and I think that it was an wonderful piece, I have been there, what girl hasn't unless you are a saint? and I think that you did really well with it.