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    dots Submission Name: Forever?dots
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    Author: loveispain
    ASL Info:    23/f/ME
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 283/198/51
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 706
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    Bytes: 921



    Description:
       Just thinking about how long forever is...and what commitment really is...and whether or not I could truly do things....forever.


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    I will love you
    Until my heart is exhausted
    Until it hurts
    I will love you with everything I am
    I will love you...forever?

    I will dream
    Of times to come
    Of times we had
    I will dream of your love, of our love
    I will dream of you...forever?

    I will smile
    For you
    For everything in our lives that is good
    I will smile for the happiness you bring me
    I will smile...forever?

    I may cry
    Because I miss you so
    Because I need you so
    I may cry for lost time
    I may cry...forever?

    I will hang on
    To our love
    To our relationship
    I will hang on to everything we are
    I will hang on...forever?

    I promise
    To stay faithful
    To show you my love everyday
    I promise my love to you
    I promise...forever?




    Submitted on 2005-01-21 18:14:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow alot of emotion and it seems like a lot of pain that you can't get through at the moment. It does take a while to go away. But a thing I learned they'll be other ones, plenty of them..
    | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]


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