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    dots Submission Name: Fountain of Youthdots
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    Author: elitegundam
    ASL Info:    25/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 68/90/20
    Words: 278
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 176
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    Bytes: 1960



    Description:
       To really understand this poem, you should read my poem called "The Loss of a Child". I was feeling really bad one day, and started writing about my daughter, this is the result


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    A babies cry,
    a child's laugh,
    the fountain of youth,
    rediscovered.
    Without those sounds,
    the silence is deafening.
    Leaving the healing aura
    of children, the young,
    sickness, pain, and age
    become an oppresive force.

    A child's love,
    love for their parent
    is anything else so pure
    as that relationship?
    With children, absence
    makes the heart grow harder
    impossible to love again

    Seperation, division
    between parent and child
    pain, so much worse
    than any physcial ailmnet
    How is life possible
    Without the one you love most?

    A child's face,
    beauty at it's best.
    innocence in their eyes
    looking up to you,
    for everything they need.
    Pure trust,
    without hesitation,
    Knowing you will protect,
    help and play
    Keeping them from
    pain, hurt, and danger

    A daughter lost,
    but not gone
    Will I ever see her,
    or is she gone for good
    Broken memories are all I have.
    Every time I think of her
    all I see is hurt and pain,
    nightmares too fresh to forget.
    How can I ever look at her,
    when the last I remember
    is holding her broken body
    in my dreams?

    Dreams too alive to be visions,
    images too clear to be thoughts,
    memories to vivid to be forgot.
    Can I ever remember her,
    as the child I used to know?
    Have the terrors of my mind
    tainted my memories forever?

    Once day, will it end?
    Can I ever hug my child,
    and tell her that I love her?
    Will I forever be seperated
    from the fountain of youth;
    the loving sounds of a child?
    Or will I be forever deaf,
    from the silence,
    the absence of joy?




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      well, this is well written again** i think that there is nothing like the love of your child. i promise though, you child will love you no matter what, all you can do is wait for the day to have that long overdue hug you deserve! keep your head up**
    | Posted on 2005-01-25 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]



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