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    dots Submission Name: My Real Illusiondots
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    Author: Cai
    ASL Info:    17/f/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 1162/401/71
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Real Illusiondots
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    A nauseaus, nervous feeling
    You bred in me
    Pins and needles of the heart.

    Asthma attacks and fake falling feelings
    Like when I close my eyes at night
    But in the daytime.

    A rush when I see you
    An emptiness when I'm away from you
    But also when I'm with you.

    Desperately Fabricating Fantasies
    To sustain myself
    To make you seem real.

    No matter how far I reach
    I can't touch
    But your illusion still taunts my heart.




    Submitted on 2005-01-23 15:20:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, when I was reading that I actually felt those feelings...great way to describe it...I feel that way sometimes...I didn't want it to end but it did:(
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]



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