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Author:	The41stSmibble
ASL Info:	19 male england
Elite Ratio:	2.95 - 41/60/15
Words:	86

Class/Type:	Poetry/Happy
Total Views:	333
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	702

Description:
If you liked this, then try The Power Of Poetry,.. It's a re-write of this poem.

Smile!

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Another Poem, another ryme,
Subliminal messages of suicide.
Stories of broken-hearts and empty holes,
Inner-depression and unresting souls.

Menacing shadows, scarce of light,
Unhinging corners, dead of night.
Blood stained cloth scarred by knife,
Crippled carcus missing life.

No asperation, dying hope,
Missing princeples, honors a joke.
Barb-wire-crown, the burning dove,
Hate rules all, overpowering love.

Sentences scratched, ordered to bleed,
Telling of lust, envy and greed.
The conclusion though, ain't that vile,
when you turn the page, and see the word smile.

Submitted on 2005-01-24 04:46:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A very well written poem. Love the title. Content itself is wonderful. You give hope to the reader. I very much enjoyed reading. I hope I helped.

Soph
| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ]
  Its nice to read a freshening poem first thing in the morning. I'm not sure "freshening" is a word, but dammit I'm using it! All my poems are worded depressed or dark and I have people tell me to try writing something nice for a change but I find it very difficult. Its a rarety for me to enjoy "nice" poems written by other people let alone me writing them. But once again you are "freshening". Thank you for sharing this writing.
| Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Jessa | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like happy poems, too. lol. I like this, your style of writing is different and that's a great thing to have in life. I've tried, I've tried so hard, not to write depressed poetry, but it always comes out so utterly sad! The only happy poems that I've got are love poems, and they even have sad notes in them. So, you're lucky, damn you...lol...just joking. I like the sarcasm in the title. Your ending line was real beautiful, great work.
| Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  You are my favorite author! I'm adding you to favorites! You are right! So much blah-y angst on here (including my poems), and all you need to feel better is "Smile." Thanks. Great! Seriously,man, I'm smiling right now, haha. Peace and Love. -Mariah
| Posted on 2005-01-24 00:00:00 | by Mariah | [ Reply to This ]
  This poem was simply awesome, I think that you have become my favorite writer at the moment, your poems aren't typical in any way, they are original and very good.You should be a songwriter, start a rock band, you would do well without having to sell out to corporate whores.
| Posted on 2005-01-24 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this poem. it has good ryming scheme and it expresses how people feel and what people write about often. Its nice to see a poem about poems about depression. It is a good change. -Oli
| Posted on 2005-01-24 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]

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