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    dots Submission Name: A Reversal Proposaldots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 338
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1321



    Description:
       As I see it, this poem could be read start to finish and back again and still make some sense. at the beginning I was telling it backwards as a memory, but when I read it last and back up, it made sense still, thus the title.


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    dotsA Reversal Proposaldots
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    In the midst of all delusion
    I can still claw my way into a problem.
    But when proposals faint
    and all together become
    sparks flash
    and fire burns
    pupils slowly dialate
    and come to the unnerving truth
    that's the only way

    In the calm of the situation
    I could still manage to prepare a new stillness
    and when the air grows thick
    and burdens the shoulders down
    head droops
    and eyes lowered
    looking at the sky is impossible
    and welcome to the greeting of concrete
    as you meet it face to face.

    In the wake of dire protection
    I stand about you, grasping your attention
    although nothing you remember about me
    and yet everything you knew is flooding back
    startled gaze
    raised eyebrow
    gasping for the right words
    hands trembling too much to be steady
    as I drop to one knee

    In the shine of what sparkles so brightly
    in its box revealed from my pocket
    you strain to see what lies inside
    and quietly listening to me
    nervous stuttering
    a modest proposal
    the sweetest words I know are yours
    taking them like the sweetest candy
    and I ask you the question.




    Submitted on 2005-01-24 22:20:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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