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    dots Submission Name: Come to the Lorddots
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    Author: sphen
    ASL Info:    18/M/Here
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 21/26/7
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 1280
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    Bytes: 538



    Description:
       Some of the best writings in all of history were written on just whatever was handy. Take the Gettysburg address. Lincoln wrote it on the back of an envelope on the train to deliver it. This is by no means the Gettysburg address, but I did write it on a napkin at lunch!


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    dotsCome to the Lorddots
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    The Most High God
    Reigns over all
    Hear His voice!
    Heed His call!
    His voice that made
    The heav'ns and earth
    The call that spawned
    The universe
    This voice has cried
    Called down to man
    Call back to Him!
    Hold out your hand!
    Seek the Lord
    While He is near!
    Call to Him
    While He is here!
    He came to save
    That which was lost
    He paid the price
    Gave up the cost
    He was the price
    He paid the cost




    Submitted on 2005-01-24 23:56:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that this could be made into a beautiful worship song! I like that you expressed it in an uncomplicated fashion. It draws alot of attention to Christ, and away from ourselves. You did a good job! I really enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2005-01-25 00:00:00 | by bluemayskye | [ Reply to This ]


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