An Ego Of Achievement
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An Ego Of Achievement
Hours Stretch Themselves like Words on bad paper And seconds Fly and land Like drops of ink on a letter To nowhere Oh I believe You know what I mean Whatever you might achieve Today doesn't mean a thing |
Submitted on 2005-01-25 19:07:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| hmm...I like this... I think, according to the mood I am in today... that this is true and this poem means something to me... fruitless effort are so damaging Rubi | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by Rubi_Roja | [ Reply to This ] | Like the poem,but disagree with its contents. | Especially this part: Whatever you might achieve Today doesn't mean a thing because these are memories that last a lifetime and not just for oneself but for others as well. | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ] | The title is ironic. I agree that some people have egos that scream "achiever," even when they may not have any or work towards any (I hope I'm reading this right). | And seconds Fly and land Like drops of ink on a letter To nowhere I also see that in the scope of things one bad day means nothing, but one day of slacking often turns into ten. I like "Words on bad paper." I suppose that beats "Bad words on paper" or "Bad words on good paper." | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ] | i like this. if you really think about it achievement is all your ego most of the time. like i won a soccer game or something. idk to me it all gets annoying how people are omg im so awesome and btw [censored]. | | Posted on 2005-01-25 00:00:00 | by broken_dreamer | [ Reply to This ] | |
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