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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 263
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 811
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1574



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    Since you left me, my life ain't been the same
    I'm useless without your life
    I'm calling, crying, out your name
    but when I look around, your love's no where to be found
    please come back to me, you know you're my everything
    who will love me, who will care
    who will be there when I need someone for me
    who will be there to dry my eyes when I go down on my knees
    I need you to say

    Wherever you go, whatever you do
    you know I'm waiting, you know I'll never leave
    whatever it takes, whatever's at stake, just know I love you
    and know I'll be right here
    and no matter what it takes,
    I'll be waiting here for you, always
    Good-bye is such a hard thing to say
    when your all I know, when you're my everything
    and who will stay, and care for me
    when you're gone, I'll be all alone
    who will call and comfort
    and fulfill my needs
    who will love me, who will care
    who will be there when I need someone for me
    who will be there to dry my eyes when I go down on my knees
    I need you to say

    All my life I've been waiting for someone like you
    So please don't say it's over, tell me this can't be true
    Please don't leave me don't walk away
    You know your love is something I can't do without
    so whatever it takes , or how my heart breaks, you know I'll always be around




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