Red Roses/Splendor
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I don't really know where this came from, but I'm digging it, in a weird whacked out way. Doesn't seem very me but I guess that's the beauty of writing. Stepping outside of yourself.
Red Roses/Splendor
Your lips are my favorite memory So red and soft I just wish to touch my finger to them one last time Ever so gently So that I barely feel it Beauty personified in that red sweetness Soft as flower petals Red roses Splendor They are the heaven of your whole being A cooling shade in the garden of you Words gently spoken escape those lips And they wrap around me Like strong arms But soft as flower petals Red roses Splendor. |
Submitted on 2005-01-25 20:27:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like the line about words gently spoken wrap around me like strong arms. Very poetic and romantic. I don't know why you say this poem doesnt seem very you. What's wrong with having a side so romantic and beautiful. This is real art work here.  | Posted on 2005-02-04 00:00:00 | by spoken | [ Reply to This ] | I liked this poem for a lot of reasons: | I love roses, my name should tell you that, and I deeply believe in the passion and splendor in a rose. I suggest that you read a couple of my poems "a kiss" and 'love". because they are similar to this one. I'm gonna put you on my stalked list. Keep Up The Good Work! | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by Chi-Town Rose | [ Reply to This ] | A beautifully erotic poem, especially if you read it upside down. | I like your poem, because, apart from any delicious innuendos ( which you probably weren't even aware your subconscious was feeding you) it is clear and easy to follow, not a jumble of arcane symbolism as some love poems are. This is sweet, gentle, feminine, a refreshingly nice poem. | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ] | |
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