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    dots Submission Name: Said To Your Facedots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 266
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1264



    Description:
       The actual title is 'What I Wish I Could Say To Your Face'. Its basically what it is. I wrote this in an email but was too scared to push the send button. Sometimes I hate my romanticism.


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    Awestruck, lovely you are
    ravishing, amazing you are
    worlds beyond what you think of yourself
    never do you know of how you capture my breath.
    Blossoming flowers
    compare not to your beckoning smile
    everything about you commands attention.
    Its like I'm dreaming
    everytime you walk towards me
    and I'm falling everytime we part
    down into a bothersome pit
    that only you care enough to help me out of.

    Enrapturing, you are
    astonishing, you are
    as I would look into your eyes
    and imagine the universe
    in all its other worldly beauty.
    You cannot say no one cares
    for I place all care on me
    anything you need, I'll take care of.
    The jazzy step in your walk
    contageous to watch
    outrageous to its appeal.
    fearing that I may never again have this chance
    I spill the beans and confess now.
    Thinking about you always,
    Altogether soothing in my soul
    Mearly passing time until time is right
    Right enough for me to catch
    Altogether chancing a possibility
    that my intuition
    for once, doesn't make a fool out of me




    Submitted on 2005-01-25 21:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoever you were writing thsi to you shoud go and this time hit the send button because its good to let people know how you a ctually feel instead of hiding it from them..i hope you get the "balls" lol to do it good luck! and life life to the fullest!
    | Posted on 2005-01-27 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, and I just had two complaints about this. Not too harmful-

    ~I spill the beans and confess now.~

    I didn't think that was too romantic. and I didn't like the title you firts give,but I do like the one in the description so I should really be complaining about that one. So, I hope this helps a little.
    | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww! I'm telling you htis now though. Don't be afraid to hit that send button. I will also tell you that if she doesn't appreciate this piece, then I don't know what to tell you. This is a grand oppurtunity. Do you really want to miss out on it? What if, byy some peculiar reason, you end up in the middle of a fairytale-where you don't have her? And what if you are always stuck in the middle of the fairytal-because for osme odd reason, the middle is always the strangest part to a fairytale and probably the part, that someone ends up crying? This may sound a bit strange, I presume. I mean, the part with the 'middle of the fairytale.' But she should say yes to you. If you spend the time to write her such things that are this amazing, then she should realize that you would be devoted to her. Don't be afraid, you have nothng to be ashamed of. This is worth every moment of embarrassment it could possibly bring. (But personally, I don't think it wouold bring any. So don't worry about it) I gues I do understand this situation and how you can be unsure of yourself, but I have a feeling that in your heart it's telling you not to hold back and go for who you love. I think that is your mind that is holding you back, so I say, follow your heart. It may very well be the best thing you ever do. The best of luck with asking her! <3
    | Posted on 2005-01-26 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]



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