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    dots Submission Name: Are you really?dots
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    Author: lost_escape
    ASL Info:    16/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 44/60/23
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 249
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1298



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       Oh jeeze. I have a freind online, i'm kinda into, weve been talking for a few months now, and recently, he has kind of been ignoring me. I really think i love him, and its driving me nuts!


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    dotsAre you really?dots
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    Are you what i see you as,
    are you all that bright?
    Are you really not like others,
    are you a new sight?
    My mind has built you up so much,
    its as if you are a dream.
    Do you play head games with me,
    are you what you seem?
    Are you filled with fake intelligence,
    made up for the act?
    Why does it always seem to me,
    you know just what i've lacked
    Can you really play guitar,
    are you really good?
    I know its dumb to think these thoughts,
    forget all this i should.
    You say things so full of wit,
    integrity, and light
    I'm silly for wrting this,
    but send it, i just might.
    Hiding my thoughts gets me no where,
    there is no point in doing so.
    Denying these thoughts gets me less,
    so these feelings I will show.
    I don't want you to love me,
    I dont want to "be with you",
    I just enjoy your company,
    and all i say is true
    So take this as you wish,
    throw it away, forget it all
    Deny my very existance,
    So i'll feel 2 feet tall.
    Or, maybe cherish it,
    And enjoy me, who I am,
    Try to be yourself
    Please don't be a scam.




    Submitted on 2005-01-27 21:35:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great poem about this guy but if you want my advice on online dating things you never now what you might be getting into cause you never now if he wants to just rape you or sumtin else but if you wanna still like him its up to you. great poem though i liked it...
    | Posted on 2005-01-28 00:00:00 | by Draco | [ Reply to This ]
      it was a good write, seemed to question everything about this person from his skills to his inteligence... thats kinda a reason i stay away from the online thing... anyone can be anyone
    but well written
    | Posted on 2005-01-27 00:00:00 | by ceestyl | [ Reply to This ]



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