Lust, Betrayal, and Misery -------------------------------------------
She was an angel fallen from the sky.
She came to me so willing
And I loved every second of it.
Our hearts combined invulnerable to mortality.
It was everlasting.
Our souls merged through our lips.
So perfect. So pure.
But in the end it all went away.
My love for you was broken.
Betrayed by a kiss.
How could you?
She abandoned you! Currupted you!
And in the midst of winters cold embrace,
I saved you.
I held you.
I loved you!
What temptation did I fall for?
How could a spirit so strong
Make me cripple? So weak?
Now you have left me alone to die.
Paralyzed in this midnight icy hell.
I can't move. I can't breathe!
And your image haunts me as I freeze.
Remember me. Remember our love.
Be my savior as I was for you
Show me the way!
Guide me before it's too late!
No. Hope has abandoned me
And Death comes creeping in
Beneath my skin.
It's hurting me. Feeding on me.
Turning my lust to love
My hate to revenge.
What have I become?
I kill myself and bleed chaos
All for you?
This is the final end. This is my fate.
Surrender is my only hope.
i want to say i loved that poem, but , alas, it would be an understatement. the emotion was so strong in that poem that i almost could FEEL my heart break, i could almost FEEL the pain. that, my friend, is exactly how it should be.
Very good. You really made it seem real. I think when people read this that they can feel what you are intending them to feel. I felt the intense mood of it. It really affected me.
I love the flow of your poem. . . how you tell the tale of how happy and perfect things are. I not only do i feel the emotion you bring across but i can totally relate! Nice writing;)
Submission Name: Lust, Betrayal, and Misery
