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    dots Submission Name: soon i'll be far awaydots
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    Author: LLRDD
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 28/42/19
    Words: 807
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotssoon i'll be far awaydots
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    Soon enough I will be far away. Not alone, Nor secluded, but safe from the dispairing confusion that clusters in the normals head. Why should I stick around to see the slow suicide of the family I know? Why not learn a new trait? explore the already explored for my first time. maybe I'll learn something new, or not. But all in all there is always the expierence I gained. no help from you, but a little from them, That's what i Say when the end has to end.
    why Can't the beginning begin instead of just it begins? it's so plain give me variety. give me a giraffe in a tree with a bird as its best friend who informs him of the lion in the field. everyone needs a close friend like that. someone to save you from the hulicination where your happy with who you are. how come we aren't mad about who we are? why don't we hate everything about us? Because all of us are a little selfish and consided. If we need anything we always have our selfs, in fact we are our own best friends and slaves, for we can never say no to our own body. indulge your self in your self what do you have to lose. eat that chocolate cake, it won't hurt you now.
    But what is this thing leading you away from your confined cell? don't let it rush you to fast. its only a dark hole you call you own. Your own little peace of a chipped sorrow block. If good intened us to do good wouldn't you think we would all do good? would we live in a bright world of rich and luxirious fruits? would we sip the sweet necture of life from a two foot tree? no because bad intends us to do bad , and every where there's bad.
    Look down. never look up. you'll get hit with a bat. If we don't see it coming the pain won't be so bad. it'll subside and you'll realized you should have looked up to prevent it. but you didn't and you listened to me anyway. that's the problem in society. we follow every little noligable fact, even though it may not be about life.
    we're all guilty, we aren't innocent. if you show me one man who is you will show me jesus.
    So follow your shoes where ever they go they can not harm you. are gonna follow this advice and get hit with a bat again? I'll leave this choice to you. But maybe not, you don't know what's good for you. but maybe the girl sitting behind you quiet does. ask her. Exit you self for 1 second ok comeback. what did you see? nothing you need a mirror to see your ugly, un loving soul. or maybe a puddle so you can see the ripple form of you because that's what I see. I see a little bit of that in every one.
    expand now be a rubber band. do you live in house. or do you live in a home? do you have a family or just a mom and dad with siblings? Do you have friends or just peers? Whens the last time you realized something was beautiful? stop and smell the flowers. There not that great. ok, i lied but they're all gonna die. WE all talk of every one being different, do I look different than you? do I?
    why don't we rebel? do what you know you always wanted to do. break a window, hammer a building down just for fun. You know you'll love the sound isn't that the only reason we do anything? the sound. the sound of a reaction. the horrible terrior that overwhelms the unusually impared. Go on Live you life thinking no one understands. cut your self one more time. Nothing can make you happy. You'll never be perfect, start thinking money can buy happiness, Yeah you'll find love at first sight, sure reality is simple just join a t.v. show. you'll learn all lives lessons in just a few months. never take a risk just try new things. Nothing Ever Comes Easy. At least not for me. self pitty what a baby. Never learn fight for whats not right. end it all, Begin today, Soon I'll be far away.




    Submitted on 2005-01-28 15:12:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hello dear this is rather long. it would be nce if you could somehow shoren it asit was rather a chore to read the whole thing. I am glad that i did tho. It was very reflective. :)
    Much Love
    ~LeAnna~
    | Posted on 2005-01-28 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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