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    dots Submission Name: Mirrordots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    This cannot be my real life,
    maybe it's a caricature
    that I view through a window
    with reflections that are
    flickers of the people I love,
    and in this glass
    all this cruelty
    is just those things
    inside of your head
    that you say,
    but should never say,
    to any other than a mirror.

    Submitted on 2004-03-27 11:19:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good write, you used a kinda sorta real life experience about how people really act, they only say certain things to their self, and they say it to am irrior great analogy!
    | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      maybe this life is real, maybe it is not. i'll never really know it it's all over and till it's too late. great write.
    | Posted on 2004-03-27 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write, cuddle. I like the shortness of it, the way those mirror thoughts tend to be, short and choppy. And I like the hope that isn't really a hope, the words are hope but the tone knows despair.

    ~ Niphredil
    | Posted on 2004-03-27 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this very much because I feel like this sometimes too. it has a great ending.
    | Posted on 2004-03-27 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ehh. I don't talk to the mirror, I know what I look like and fairly enough, I don't like it. So I would prefer just talking out loud to myself while I lay on the sofa.
    | Posted on 2004-03-27 00:00:00 | by Das_Ein_Sinender | [ Reply to This ]

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