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Im in Love

Author: JADE
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Im in Love

I’m in love.
Some people don’t know how that feels.
And at one point in time, I felt like I would never know how it feels.
I’m in love.
And the words you see before you on this page, can barely express how I’m really feeling.
Have you ever been so happy, that all you can do is smile? Not smirk, or the kind of smile that comes from a good joke, I mean the smile that comes across your face and never leaves. The kind that shows your happiness, the joy in your soul, the kind that depicts the kind of happiness God has intended for us to experience. The kind of smile, that makes everybody look at you and just know that your in love.

Cause see, I’m in love.
Have you ever been in the company of someone so precious, so pure, so caring, that the only thing you see when you look at them is love? All you see, is the good in their heart, the intelligence in their mind, and joy in their soul? Have you ever been in the presence of someone that was so kind, that you felt blessed just to be there?
I’m in love.

Have you ever had someone inside you, and looked into in to their eyes and saw your future? Have you ever laid in their arms, and just feel so safe; as if an invisible shield made by God himself surrounded you and kept you from all the danger in the world. Like everyday was perfect, and every moment was sacred as long as they were with you.

Have you ever made memories of love and passion; the kind you look back on and wish they never ended? Ever been in complete bliss, and wished it never ended? Ever felt so strong about that special someone that if you didn’t express how you felt, you would explode?

See im in love; and I’ve felt every single one of these things, to its full potential and then some. I’ve been on cloud nine, in heaven, and high; everything that represents a feeling of happiness on a surreal level. Because thats how HE makes me feel, he makes me feel like I’m dreaming a perfect dream when I wake up to another day. HE makes me feel like reality isn’t real, and to be in love with him, is as natural as breathing. Simple pleasures don’t match up to the pleasures of HIM. Looking into HIS eyes is a pleasure, feelings HIS touch, is a pleasure, hearing HIS voice is a pleasure, being in HIS presence is a pleasure. Im’ in love; and I’d be a fool to lose it. Id be a fool to come down from this high, that has me in a permnante being. If this was a drug, the FDA would ban it for being so good. But see its my drug, HE’s my drug, HE makes me feel good when life doesn’t. HE satisfy’s my feeling num, when I don’t want to be hurt. HE makes me happy when Im sad; and theres no rehabilitation for HIM. Cuz Im in love; and there is nothing anyone can do about it.

Submitted on 2005-01-28 23:53:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a nice write! Yeah, this is a great feeling isn't it? Now if we could only get it to last! haha! No, seriously, it really is awesome when two people love each other so much. It is important for a lasting relationship to feel what you have described in this writing. And the excitement and joy just jumps out throughout the whole poem. I hope this love lasts a lifetime for you! Good poem, take care!

| Posted on 2005-08-02 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  i thought this was very nice. how you kept saying I'm In Love here and there, as to remind the reader because you're so excited.

the only thing that kind of made me hmmm sigh a little in disappointment was towards the end you started a different type of spelling theme. You became u
And became n
Never became neva

You completely kept my attention through this entire thing which isn't always an easy thing to do, especially with something so long. But i have to admit when i seen the spell changes, it almost caused me to stop reading because i thought it was going to turn into something that would ruin what i liked so far. i'm glad that i decided to keep reading though, because regardless of the irritating spelling, it was very lovely.
good luck with all your love!
| Posted on 2005-01-29 00:00:00 | by SilentWhisper | [ Reply to This ]

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