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    dots Submission Name: Because of Youdots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 630
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    Bytes: 1433



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    dotsBecause of Youdots
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    I'm a new man

    Feeling feelings that I never knew
    That's because of the fact
    That I'm so in love with you.
    Feels like I'm flyin'
    But I'm walkin' on the ground
    That's because I'm so high
    And I'm never comin' down.

    And to think that just a year ago
    I was so strung out - And all alone
    I never felt so low
    Now I got the world in the palm of my hand.

    Because of you
    I turned around my life
    Because of you
    I think of all the things that you do
    I turned around my life
    Because of you

    Never believed in miracles
    Til' you opened up my eyes
    Now I know just how it feels.
    Ooh your love is right on time.
    I'm so crazy 'bout your love.
    Yeah- you blow my mind.

    My life is like a resurrection
    Talk about your love- We're talkin' pure perfection.
    Now I got the world in the palm of my hand.

    You turn me up
    You make me high
    When I feel your love
    I wanna fly
    No matter what we're going through
    There ain't nothing we can't do
    You turn me up
    You make me high
    When I feel your love- I wanna fly
    Now I know that dreams come true
    Because of you




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