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    dots Submission Name: Could You?dots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 750
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 973



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    dotsCould You?dots
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    Maybe I donít deserve your affection
    But I got it bad, so bad for you
    So baby I need some indication
    That when I give my heart
    Youíll give me your heart too

    Could you learn to love someone
    Could you teach your heart to love
    I wonder if you could do it
    Cause I know that I could sure love you
    Could you learn to love someone
    Could you teach your heart to love
    Tell me that you could do it
    Cause I wanna give my love to you

    Now what can I do to make an impression
    Iíll die 1000 times for you, baby
    What more you want then dedication
    Why canít you give your love to me
    The way I give my love to you

    In a world where people
    Are longing for true love
    How could anyone not know what they want
    For once in your life
    Donít be afraid to love
    Donít run away from love
    Donít be afraid to love




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