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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 468
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsRememberdots
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    No oh, remember to forget you

    Sometimes I really really miss you
    And when I really really start to
    I stop myself from doing
    Something that I might regret
    Like picking up the phone to call you
    Like hanging out and dreaming of you
    Like thinking back to the very first moment we met
    Then it comes like a flash
    That's when I

    I remember to forget your name
    As you play your games on someone else
    I got a lot of things to do with someone who
    Loves me better, better than you
    Not the same 'cause you changed around the rules
    Since there's nothing left to second guess
    I remember to forget

    Oh ooh whoa ooh whoa
    I remember to forget
    Oh yeah

    Some days it's very very easy
    To feel like you and I were really
    So meant to be together
    So meant to try love again
    When will I ever meet another?
    Am I always gonna wonder?
    'Bout what you're doing, where you are
    And if my heart will mend?
    Then it comes like a flash
    That when I

    I remember to forget your name
    As you play your games on someone else
    I got a lot of things to do with someone who
    Loves me better, better than you
    Not the same 'cause you changed around the rules
    Since there's nothing left to second guess
    I remember to forget
    No oh, remember to forget you

    I remember to forget
    Your name when you play your games
    On someone else
    I got a lot of things to do with someone who
    Loves me better
    Better than you
    Then it comes like a flash
    That's when I

    I remember to forget your name
    As you play your games on someone else
    I got a lot of things to do with someone who
    Loves me better, better than you
    Not the same 'cause you changed around the rules
    Since there's nothing left to second guess
    I remember to forget

    I remember to forget your name
    As you play your games on someone else
    I got a lot of things to do with someone who
    Loves me better, better than you
    Not the same 'cause you changed around the rules
    Since there's nothing left to second guess
    I remember to forget

    Ohh
    I remember to forget
    Your name when you play your games
    On someone else
    I remember to forget




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    ||| Comments |||
      i love this! this is totally cool. do you play any instruments or sing? where are you? i'm in l.a. i was wondering if maybe you could consider cutting out maybe two of the last choruses and possibly maybe adding another verse. if you are interested i play guitar and record all the time. if you're up for it maybe we could do something with this song of yours. i just absolutely love music. i really love what you're saying here, i think this could be a great song. i'll be playing at a small dive called sacred fools. i've played at some little places here and there like the fret house. i've also recorded a bit in a real recording studio and a lot at home in my little wannabee studio. but, the way i figure is this is what i love to do. for me, it's therapy and i always welcome a collaboration.
    | Posted on 2005-01-29 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]


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