Description: just pissed and depressed for several reasons. if you don't get it, don't feel bad. as soon as i feel better about life in general, i probably won't eiter
in memory of the living -------------------------------------------
I propose a toast to those amngst us
Who refuse truth
A toast to those who refuse to accept
We will all die shortly
A toast to those who refuse to believe
This all comes to an end
A toast to those who don't understand
This all comes out to nothing
A toast to those who insist we follow
Their path to oblivion
So here it is:
Three cheers to the gleeful
For tomorrow never comes...
It's all just another today
I love it, plain and simple. I understand every bit of it. I've felt the saem way and you fianlly wrote it down int he best way i could have imagined. It's excellent, amazing, extraordinary, if this is a random thought, then what are you poems like?
This is pretty darn cool,because it so damn real with whining or crying the blues. Of course it suppose to be a little hard to understand, otherwise you wouldn't be writing from a a confused,pissed off point of view.
This poem kind of squashes all hope of tomorrow, don't you think? Thanks for taking my hopeful thoughts and totally leaving me with nothing. But, you categorized this poem as dark, and so, I suppose you got your message across! It sounds somewhat sarcastic at the last bit. Sometimes we totally lose our ambition, and perhaps you very feeling a bit of this at the time.
I get it. It makes perfect sense, but mayby that's because i would much rather not comprehend anything right now, but instead i comprehend the strange...anyway, i liked it.
Dude. I may not understand it, but things like this apply to every living person, imo. Your image of giving a toast was kind of impelling. And sorry about your reasons for you being depressed and such. Hope you feel better soon. Great Write. ~Paco!
Submission Name: in memory of the living
