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    dots Submission Name: Can't Find The Wordsdots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 409
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsCan't Find The Wordsdots
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    Waiting for this feeling
    That I'm drowning in to subside
    You make me swim like a beginner
    Like I'm new at life
    All these words don't come easy
    No they always seem to stop
    There is awkward silence yeah
    Anytime we talk

    Oh but I wanna let it in
    I wanna ease all your doubts
    I keep trying to get it out

    But if I can't find the words
    To tell you what I'm feeling
    Baby that don't mean
    It don't mean that I don't feel it
    I'm trying to tell you girl
    But if you don't believe just look and see
    My face says what you mean to me
    When I can't find the words

    I know I can send you flowers
    To try to make my feelings clear
    And girl I could hold you tight for hours
    I wanna tell you what you're trying to hear

    Oh and I wanna let it in
    I wanna ease all your doubts
    I keep trying to get it out

    But if I can't find the words
    To tell you what I'm feeling
    Baby that don't mean
    It don't mean that I don't feel it
    I'm trying to tell you girl
    But if you don't believe just look and see
    My face says what you mean to me
    When I can't find the words

    But I know sometimes I leave you so upset
    Cos I got all these bits and pieces in my head
    I know because I let you struggle with the things I haven't said

    When I can't find the words
    When I can't find the words
    When I, when I, when I can't find the words
    I wanna ease all your doubts
    I keep trying to get it out

    But if I can't find the words
    To tell you what I'm feeling
    But baby that don't mean
    It don't mean that I don't feel it
    I'm trying to tell you girl
    But if you don't believe just look and see

    My smile says what you mean to me
    When I can't find the words
    If I can't find the words




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