This is a cute little poem... it makes me think of a country song, not that that is a bad thing, I mean, some country is good, lol. I like it though, it like makes me think of a really handsome guy that is always around the ocean, stuck on the water, but so so sexy, lmao... I like this as much as your other stuff, you are a good writer, like me, lol. Good job!
I really enjoy poems that center around the theme of someone's eyes. I like to see how the person expresses their ideas on such a popular topic. I'd say that you have a pretty strong piece here. I'd probably draw a line across your poem between the first two and the last two stnazas. I'm a big fan of the last two. Your voice and personal style really shine through, but the first two dabble in the realm of clichés. Your voice begins to gain strength in the second stanza, but I know that you can reword them a bit (not entirely) and make them shine with the same strong voice you exhibit toward the end.