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    dots Submission Name: January 29thdots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 273
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    Bytes: 723



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       I Couldn't think of a title and it was 11:59, so I called it that. Its about the same girl as always, so maybe there is more meaning in this one.


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    dotsJanuary 29thdots
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    If on another day I fail
    on another day I don't prevail
    I pray that God guide my footsteps
    in the direction I should go next.
    The words pulsing in my brain
    drive me literally insane.
    The emotions that beat in my heart
    are literally tearing me apart.
    But, do know, that once I find you
    I'll have a never ending list to show you.
    Doubtful, but I stand in confidence
    my actions to get to you now commence;
    A Picture is worth a thousand words
    I only have one picture, more than a thousand words
    So, in case I come up short, I'll give you me.
    Bound by my fears no more, You have everything I'll ever be.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Well,the title's fine. So is the poem. It's so sweet,actually loving someone that much.
    I can't wait for you to actually do something about it!
    | Posted on 2005-01-30 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this one! I usually show a few lines I especially like...but then I would just be copying the whole poem into this little box. This poem shows very well that we just can't live with our Heavenly Father. Lovely.
    | Posted on 2005-01-30 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey there. This has such a lovely sentiment behind it. I love this. Very sweet. Title-wise, I have no suggestions. But titles aren't everything.

    Beautiful writing. Much love to ya.
    | Posted on 2005-01-30 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent if you ask me, it goes behind with a lot of feeling. It's comforting me right now... I hope to see a lot more of your work with this much feeling.
    | Posted on 2005-02-02 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]



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